Hello Sophomores!
Here is one more resource to help ensure success for your analysis and FIRST GRADE of the new semester. This is a draft....which means that there is so much more I could do or fix. Please note how I present the argument and then continue to support it with CD and most importantly MY COMMENTARY. I would add more commentary for this draft for sure!
Good luck. Put in the time and effort. This is due at the door tomorrow.
***Also - a quick reminder for your first Figment Friday. Make sure you have your creative piece (typed) with copies for your group members (at least 5). Bring some questions with you? What are hoping to improve?
Take Care,
Samakosky
Prep Advice: Use the 4
questions given (page 10 in your NB) to guide you. Use the format we learned to help you
organize your thoughts – TS, CD, CM.
Remember that your commentary – what you think – your interpretation –
is most meaningful. Choose worthwhile
concrete details to focus on. Include
how Clinton’s choice of language/diction assists in his argument.
TS – In his speech….., Clinton argues that there is a “great
crisis of the spirit” that is gripping African American inner city communities
in the United States. Clinton passionately
addresses the predominately Af/Am, southern, and religious congregation with a
purposeful and methodical call to action; that the will to curb any issues
concerning crime, violence, drug use, and employment must first begin from
within. Clinton implores for deep
reflection and soul searching regarding matters of family values, morals, and a
connection to our roots as the truest solutions to solving such crisis.
CD – In paragraph 20 and 21, Clinton rhetorically asks the
congregation to imagine how MLK would react to the current status of the
nation. (Include text) He then enthusiastically
repeats all the positive accomplishments – equality, etc, etc… However, Clinton
quickly counterclaims with examples of crime and violence, essentially a
“misuse” of the freedoms that MLK lived and died for. (Insert an Example here) Clintons
logical and heartfelt approach and appeals – give way to his own
credibility.
CM – Answer why his logical/heartfelt approach/appeals and
first person perspective is not only creative and purposeful – but also how
this ties to the argument – dreams/freedoms of MLK misued.
TS - He cites several emotional anecdotes in paragraphs
23-29. His inclusion of an endearing
plea, “it is our moral duty to turn it
(this crisis) around” – incites an inclusive personal call to action to every
person in attendance.
CD - Clinton states,
“sometimes all the answers have to come from the values and the stirrings and
the voices that speak within us”. This is directly related to the initial
argument that reflection and inner change must happen for outside growth to
occur.(More CM needed)
CM – Clinton uses rich biblical imagery and specific religious
diction to connect to his devout audience.
He connects the history of the venue and the legacy of Martin Luther
King to call to action for us to “reach inside to the values, the spirit, the
soul, and the truth of human nature” so that “we will honor the life and work
of MLK, and the church”.
Conclusion – Clinton states that all the hard work and reform that
governments do is meaningless if the true work does not come from within the
individuals that make up a community. His logical approach and ability to
connect with emotional (pathos) and relatable anecdotes allows for a captivated
audience – who understands and realizes such crisis can only be solved through
willingness, faith, and a recharge of the human soul.
